Have all plumbed but just doesnt seem right.
car seems to run fine with fuel making its way around ok, but when i turn car off its makes a sucking noise. also is leaking onto my diff from somewhere but think this may be due to fuel vapour line not being plumbed in.
the returns to the main tank seem to be an overkill also??
have attached some pics, any feedback is appreciated 

Lift pump has to supply volume to surge tank / fuel cell which is sufficient to meet the demands of full throttle/load/RPM, it is not variable speed, so at idle all excess fuel is returned to the fuel tank.
I don't understand the rest of the "RED" lines unless they are the same as VB to VL and in that case the Vapour return line should be connected to the filler neck..
What is the small black box with the red lines connecting to it? fuel vapour reservoir (mounted on the filler neck ) or carbon cannister.
Hot fuel tip (101) fuel pump/regulator/surge tank as close to fuel tank as possible " to minimise heat pickup" insulate fuel rails and fuel lines in engine bay, (even in a deadend system)
Cheers
Balfizar